Spider-man 4 Novelazation Part 1 (RY's Version)

Well your welcome to the first of the rest of the Spider-man 4 Novelazation (not the real one the one i will be creating) so enjoy and please tell me what you thought of it and anything you think should be changed... Enjoy and be sure to comment :-)

Spider-man 4 Novelazation Part 1:

Brooklyn Bridge 7:20 P.M.
"It's almost sundown" said The Kingpin's most loyal Thug to another "We should start our assault now, the boat is nearly below us", Wait for it... Wait for it... Now." Said Kraven the Hunter as his guards jupmed from the bridge by ropes. You've got 13 armed men, two on the left side three on the right side and four at the stern, and it is unknown were the other four guys are" said another highly equiped thug.

Inside the beautiful Yaught...
"I told you i have the money" said the KingPin to a mysteriously looking cat type of person. "Then were is it!", "I don't have it on me kid, you better run home before you miss SpongeBob" Wack! As the KingPin was slapped across the face by a strangley looking women. "Who are you?" Said the KingPin to her, "Call me BlackCat" "You better watch out cat" "and why is that?" "look up", Blackcat looked up and then a hole blasted through the bow so hard that it went out to the water, and the boat started to sink, through the large hole came Kraven who's foot met Blackcat's nose and made her pass out. "I hate cats" said the KingPin "Lets go boss, before were over 50 feet under the surface" Quickly, before the cops realize what has just happened".

Bow of the boat.
The KingPin and Kraven along with a few other guards have made it to the bow "quickly we have to"- Bang! A gun shot was fired by BlackCat's men and killed the kingpins guars except for Kraven, Kraven started to stab all of the guards and killed most of them from behind while the KingPin decide to conserve his strength, A Chopper got lower and lower until the Kingpin and Kraven escaped of into the night breeze.

Back on the boat:
The police boats have surrounded the half submerged boat along with costguards and firefighters, "what is the situation" said Spider-man to a NYPD Officer, "Oh my god your Spi- "what the situation" Asked Spider-man once again, "There is believed to be a women traped at the bow of the boat passed out" "Im on it" "Wait Spidey! Can i have an autograph?" Spider-man lands on the bow and begins to search for the missing women, finally he finds her and swings from the boat to the Brooklyn bridge, as Spider-man is swinging with this women in his arms she wakes up and elbows Spider-man in the face, making him let go and she starts to swing away with her grappiling hooks, sending Spider-man to fall into the river. Minutes later he swims and then sits on one of the supporters of the bridge "Why do i always get the freaks?" Spiderman mumbled to himself